| "The Shini Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shi-tenshi On: September 08, 2005 03:01 CDT
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yay i found it! okay here's the deal i found this story once by you on another site but I lost the site and hence the story i really really loved this story and was sad until i found it here (of course on the other site you only got to the chapter where Duo goes to find Heero so it's a good surprise that this one has several more chapter though you may want to edit some of your chapters for those weird typing mistakes). anyways i really love this story still and hope you update it soon (and this time i will NOT lose it). well again can't wait for the next chapter. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: March 08, 2005 04:46 CST
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ch11 - '*Insert Lemon*' haha... so did you decide not to write one? or leave it to the imagination of the rader
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: March 07, 2005 22:41 CST
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ch7 - so will you actually include m-pregnancy? *pleasesayyespleasesayyes* And will we get to read about the kits!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 14:52 CST
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ch.5 'Heero squeaked.' LOL poor heero!! a squeaking heero is so cute!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 14:38 CST
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ch.4 *whines* formating problems! it's hard to read but it was good!
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Reviewed By: priscel - - On: March 07, 2005 10:56 CST
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ch.3 - hey why were you laughing? 'linkin (snigger) hotel' Is it cuz you named the place after Linkin Park?
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Reviewed By: priscel - - On: March 07, 2005 10:43 CST
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ch.2 - wha- i think i love this story, but damn why did tro have to be so cold to Quat damn him! Duty isn't everything!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 10:07 CST
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ch.1- I like!!! oh man that was good, but where did the blood come from in Duo's mane? I think there was a bit of confusion when Trowa bit Duo's side and carried him off. And then suddenly he turned and saw Duo run up behind!?! see the confusion there? Cuz Duo was in mid transformation and he 'sank his teeth into his flank' and ran suggesting that he carried Duo off because if it was a bite to get Duo to chase him which wouldn't make sense cuz Duo would be confused... very confused about Tro turning and biting him! Onward to next chapter! this is good but don't get a big head or anything *winks*
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 16:24 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS FIC!! your writing style keeps on changing and I found it amusing UPDATE!!
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