| "A Tangled Web of Black and Silver" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:24 CDT
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Kouga's such a... Why hasn't Ayame killed him yet?
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:20 CDT
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I never noticed Sango and Miroku like that. Making out in public... *pukes onto floor*. Poor Kagome. I thought they were better friends than that.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though you already continued, I'd just like to comment. *comment*
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was really good, but, um, don't take this the wrong way, but, um, you need to take some Language Arts courses...
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Reviewed By: Tianna On: July 25, 2005 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great i hope u up date soon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Crying Owl Blessed On: April 29, 2005 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehhehheh... poor kagome.... having to amputate her arm.... lol. sry i didn't review before... but I just checked my mail... so... sorry. Um... you have to update again! I can't wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Suns (not signed in) On: April 29, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.... your reviewers love you, h-chan! don't you feel loved??? since I already read the chapter.... i'm just reviewing now.... no need in reading it again.... lol. you have yo update soon, damnit.
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Reviewed By: BewareSolitude On: April 27, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i think you should contnue this story, i love it
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Reviewed By: kivacuttie On: April 24, 2005 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man u need to update pleasssssse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kivacuttie On: April 10, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Please write more this story is so god damn FUNNY!!! It's so creative and VERY entertaining!If I could make the letters bigger I would!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!>_<
Your Reader, MJ P.S. IYR
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Reviewed By: Crying Owl Blessed On: March 30, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh.... Whats up with sesshy????? why is he all.... homebodied? not that it isn't a good look for him, but i think i kinda miss the cold and undetectable demon lord of the western lands...anmd he's not supposed to like inuyasha!!! this is getting really interesting. please keep going!!!! I am enjoying it so much!!!!! and why has no one else reviewed? YOU HEARD THE WOMAN!!!!! no reviews, no updates!!! these people are wierdos i sware....
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Reviewed By: Crimson Suns (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One Geuss as to who this is!!!! Uh...one thing, you have to put spaces in between the paragraphs. just another wacky quirk about mm.org. GRR!!! oh well. UPDATE DAMN YOU!!
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