| "Unspoken" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 08, 2005 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Frankly, this story is interesting, but needs help. Like has been suggested before, you really should try to find a beta reader. There are several times when you simply used the wrong word in a sentence. Personally, I don't much care for the script style of writing. But if that's your style, I'll put up with it to read this story. I do love the plot.
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewed By: RainDancer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE. I REALLY WANT TO HEAR THE REST OF YOUR STORY! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 08, 2005 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story. there are some serious spelling/grammatical errors but it's got an awesome plot. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Concerned Reviewer On: June 07, 2005 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this story is a great idea, but you should try to spell the names of the characters right. Like another reviewer said, it's "Kagome" with an E, not "Kagoma." Many readers will skip a story if they see their favorite characters' names messed up.
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 08:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I think your story is good I hope you up date soon
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Title: Grammar
Reviewed By: lighting-hellcat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you have a good start but please get a beta reader alot of your homophones are wrong! And you need to correct your spelling. So think about finding a beta reader.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
listen. i like it. but something is really pissing me off! It's Kagome!!!!! not Kagoma!!!! whew now that that's off of my chest... i absolutely love the plot and stuff... but i have a question. Why do you write it like a scrpt? you know it's sortof a cool way of writing it though. this is definately not supposed to be a bad review... i mean it's a really really really good story.. it's just that your spelling is off a little. it's ok though, my fics are filled with spelling mistakes... i probobly shouldn't talk! Hah! please update soon! I LOVE IT!
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