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Reviewed By: Kagome87 On: August 03, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is only two things that bothered me though out the story. Grammer mistakes & the fact that you kept saying koi. You might want to try & play it up a bit with Japanese words such as koibito, ai/koi suru, or aishiru (sp). Other then those two factors I adored your story & hope to see you update soon. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ryni On: July 12, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Super kawaii! I really liked it. (Finally, someone does some Diary...>.
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Reviewed By: Carmella On: July 10, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!! Please update soon! I loved it! SO MUCH!!! ^_^ They make such a good couple...The explination Eclipse was giving was funny. ^_^ Innocents can be the downfall of a loveable Demon Lord, but in this case...It works ^.~
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: March 26, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. It's sweet and had me smiling a silly, sappy smile all the way through! Please add more though!!
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Title: Awsome dude
Reviewed By: eternity_101 On: March 21, 2005 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this match (Eclipse and Raenef) has always bugged me so I'm really happy that somebody actually decided to write it. Anyway Demon Diary so rocks!!! yo rock ^_^
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Title: I loved it Ashley!
Reviewed By: Tree! On: February 17, 2005 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Ashley! It's Tree! Me And Emmy finished your story! I loved it! It's awesome, I can't wait until I actually start reading Demon Diary! It sounds really good, although I am still doubting he is hotter than Sessho-kun!
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