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Reviewed By: forever broken (to lazy to log in) On: June 12, 2005 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cute!! (read it a little bit late because of work) so sorry for reviewing so late! but anyhooble it was to cute! and I hope yami get's pregnant and not yugi *evil grin* oh and please continue with SEto and Jou! pwetty please with sugar on top *puppy dog eyes* *angelface*
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Title: more please
Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: June 10, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet! Please write the next soon. Im dying to know what will happen. O, please make it a happy ending. Yami and yugi are the sweetest couple! Im on the internet so mutch, cheking if it's updated, that im going to burn out my coumpeuter. This story is the best!(the susspence is killing me, Please update soon.) *pouts* ^_^
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz (the lazy baka) On: June 08, 2005 20:47 CDT
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O.O; Oh. My. God. *dies laughing at the thought of the sexiness of Atemu pregnant* xDD I can't wait to see this...
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I know!! I am glad you are writing a sequel although I am sad to see this end. Start the sequel soon, please.
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Title: Vote for sequel people!! Vote for sequel!!!
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: June 06, 2005 18:19 CDT
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Come on people!!!!! Vote for the sequel, or I'll go over there and rip your X(... Sorry.... Lost it there... Oh well... COME ON PEOPLE!!!!!! REVEIW AND HELP THE WRITER OUT HERE!!!!!!!!!!!! Come on sequel!
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Title: AWESOME!! NEW SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: June 06, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!!!!!! I love this fic!! Turned out good, ne? I wonder who gets pregnent... *snickers*... Oh well, guess I gotta wait! Oh yeah, PLEASE COUNTINUE!! I guess a sequel makes sense..... Yay! Yami and Yugi are finnaly tougetheR ^.^!!!!!!! Please countinue as a sequal!!! I'll be looking for it when it comes out!! Good luck!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DML (darkmageliz who is not logged in) On: June 06, 2005 13:24 CDT
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Yay for the lemon! Who gets pregnant?! Who! o.o; My gosh, that thought worries me. How ARE you going to pull this off? I vote for Choice 1. (Because I don't know what else to vote for...)
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want you to keep on with this story instead of a sequel but I really don't care as long as you continue it! I want to know who is going to be pregnant, I know Kaiba will win his puppy over. Update or write the sequel soon please!! :-(
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Reviewed By: DML (darkmageliz who is not logged in) On: May 28, 2005 11:25 CDT
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*sqwee* must update! must update! :-)
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gods, let Yugi confess so Yami won't die! Poor Yami. Don't let him die! Great story. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: forever broken (just awake so to lazy to log in) On: May 28, 2005 04:32 CDT
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*shakes you* WHERE IS YAMI!!! and make yami or yugi confess please please please! and no yami is not gonna die!! and what a bout the month? do they need to confess in a month or something? but please update really really soon!! I cán't wait to read further!! *jumps up and down in excitement*
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Reviewed By: DML (darkmageliz who is too tired from her vacation to log in) On: May 26, 2005 09:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
...keep going! Keep going! Want more, want more!
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Reviewed By: eve (forever broken) On: May 25, 2005 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
DON'T YOU DARE STOPPING! IF YOU STOP I"M AFRAID I'LL HAVE TO KILL MYSELF!! AAHRG!! don't stop the story! *hehe drama queen* it is really good and cute and yes I want the sequel Pwetty please!! *angelface* so please update sooner! and PLEASE MAKE THEM CONFESS AND HAVE A NICE TIME!! ow and don't you dare killing yami or yugi! *looks at text* wow.. I am really whining... sorry!!!! so please don't stop, don't you let anyone die and update REAAAALLY soon! *wicked smile*
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Reviewed By: eve (forever broken) On: May 22, 2005 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aahrg... what is it with the one month thing? *whines* I WANNA KNOW!! and when are you going to make one confess! *angel face* bye!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it coming. Poor Yami, he needs to confess to Yugi what i going on. I don't want to see them get hurt.
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