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| "Immortality Sucks" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those were great chapters, sorry that I seem to be the only one reviewing, but it seems that most of the people who read on this website are lazy. Don't worry about long chapters, I like em that way. Can't say I feel sorry for Kuno, he had it comming to him. At least Ranma and Ryouga are getting along better.
| Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, you need to update like right now. I think you really captured everyones personalites quite nicely. I don't hate Naru either, but I think she's more violent than Akane. Update!!!!!!!
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