| "My Sweet Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, very sad. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:21 CST
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oh definitely write more. This story could go on--the possiblities are intriguing. I mean, I like the angsty moment you've set up in a one-shot and the little trick of revealing WHY Vegeta killed Bulma, but I'd just like to see more of this.
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Reviewed By: The great one reviewer that you hate to love On: February 21, 2005 12:04 CST
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O.o;; you know who I am..I absolutely LOVE your stpries sweetheart, You will have to continue to write more, these are just getting better and better, and remember..Im here for you hun.
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Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. thats sweet but...utterly disturbing. it has the makings of a brilliant fic. just could do with developing here and there. a reason why she would not luve through the pregnancy would be nice. its an intreginglook into Vegeta's feelings. nmore could hav been written where he resurects her. not a natural death you see. but anyway, its your story. i'm guessing you were just in that kind of mood when you wrote it. i do that. i'm rambling now. i'll go away *wanders off still muttering*
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Title: amazed 101
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed in) On: February 18, 2005 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was short, sweet and sad at the same time. It was so moving. I like this alot. It's sad though,...the reason for killing bulma. Good job and keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 12:14 CST
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argh! That was angsty--but well done angst. Very chilling opening. Nice resolution with Trunks. I liked the quiet helpful Goku too. I suppose I wanted a little more info as to what illness Bulma had and what was wrong with the baby. Just a little explanation. And maybe something to clear up the fact that Goku knew what had happened and was supportive of Vegeta's actions--hard to do from Vegeta's POV, I realize. The word "after-party" jarred me a little. One usually thinks of a party as a joyous occasion. I think "reception" is better for the thingie after a funeral. Really sad stuff. I'm always interested in stories dealing with Vegeta dealing with the death of Bulma. I think you got a good moment here--he would kill her if that's what she wanted.
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