| "Lover's Gain and Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Robin+Star=Love_4ever
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the idea, but it was writen a bit childish. I dont mean to hurt your feelings, but perhaps you should try making your fan fic characters act more like the original characters would...like i dont think they would all hop in bed they day after they let each other know who the really felt! Over all it was a cute story but would have been better if it had put together better! Sorry!
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Reviewed By: Guest who's reviewing this fic On: May 16, 2005 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I don't really think Tamorranians have the same anatomy as human women, but, meh. Nice fic! Keep writing!
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Title: not very good
Reviewed By: shadow3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 04:32 CST
Comment/Review:
you just made this a corny lovey dubby valentines fic, try harder. READ SECRET LOVE
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Kevin mask [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
no bad a little corny, not really origanal though but not bad
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Reviewed By: Silver_Wolf66 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 10:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved ur fic. you have to keep writing.i just want to know one thing.Is tara going to be in this?
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