| "Rubber Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: aksarah On: August 08, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww very nice! very canon and IC etc etc. luffy's so much smarter than he puts on and you captured that nicely. i'm not just being nice because i'm a huge LxN fan, either :P
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Reviewed By: Pivitor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. You have the Nami character down well, and apparantly Luffy's as well. I thought you were going to show us another side of Luffy, but it was reassuring in the end to see that good old Luffy will never change. You also really seem to have the emotions and motivations of the One Piece characters well thought out, and explained your thoughts well. Great job!
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