| "Vandread 3rd Stage: The Neo Harvest" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: anime_maniac_1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was cool.It reminded a lot of the anime and I like that.This is the first Vandread fanfic I'd read so far, and it's very good.Update soon,tata!
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Title: Awesome Job
Reviewed By: Alex/ Satan48 On: August 03, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great job and creativity, i watched both stages and this was pretty awesome. I don't think Hibiki would say "woman" as much as used, but who really cares? I can't wait to read the next chapter. The overall picture is good, and you have each character's personality down very well. Some of the other third stage possibilities i've read weren't worth reading, but this one was great! My only advice i can give is this: make the fight scenes a bit longer, and increase the drama, let there be a big fight between misty and dita or something, or even have a dread pilot or two die in the fighting. Whatever you do, i'm sure it'll be good, you're work so far kicks ass.
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Title: vandreadsthebest
Reviewed By: vandreadluver On: July 29, 2005 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wen r u gonna make more chapters these r great keep up the good work
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Title: anime rocks
Reviewed By: vandread On: July 25, 2005 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive read these four chapter and they're great i cant wait to see ur next ones
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Title: vandread rules
Reviewed By: hibiki and dita On: July 25, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep making more chapters these are really great i have read it like 5 times already
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Title: vandrad rox
Reviewed By: dita+hibiki4eva On: July 25, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the four chapters are really good you should consider sending this to gonzo cuz i would like to see it and keep making more chapters cuz ur really good
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: victoria j On: July 25, 2005 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i am a huge vandread fan i was wishing that there would be like a third stage i was so excited to hear that someone wrote one and just the love from dita and hibiki i couldnt stop reading i cant wait to read the other chapters
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Reviewed By: Anime10473 On: July 13, 2005 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Isn't Misty over Hibiki? I mean she did let Dita go with Hibiki and she's friends with her now too. I think she even encouraged her to be with him. Another thing, didn't Paiway quit her snooping and writing down other people's private bussiness, too. Anyway the story is very good so far, keep up the good work.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:10 CDT
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I saw on the first page you said you usually write InuYasha stories, where can I find them on here? BTY, I put this story on favorites on here.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Tho Im youkai obsessed,lol, I really like Vandread, alot. This is a good story, and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: vandreadBoy On: June 11, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I hope you keep writing. I wish this was in the anime.
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Title: The Fist Battle
Reviewed By: chrry Coke On: May 02, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good.Im a really big fan of vandread.You should send this to Gonzo.But Hibiki Isn't really that nice and willing.I can't wait till ur next or was that the Last? It would be cool to see a 3rd stage.
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