| "Broken Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: phalon22 (not signed in) On: March 13, 2005 23:14 CST
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Aww. So why is Yuki able to touch Kagome without turning into his animal version? Do not tell me he is Inuyasha's reincarnation or some soulmate?
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (not signed in) On: March 11, 2005 13:27 CST
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Wow Fluffy still around? Kewl. Must... Stop... Calling him... THAT! Anyways love how the story is progressing!!!
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Reviewed By: dark_sorrowful_shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please please update as soon as possible i love yuki and i love kagome and i have never read a pairing like this probably because no one has ever written it but please please please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Deafening silence (not signed in) On: March 08, 2005 21:42 CST
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Yay! and a plot develops! Thanks for including sesshy-sama, he always brings a fic way up in my opinion. I assume we're in for some explainations come next chapter? I hope so, because i really need to know what happened with the rest of the shard hunters. Oh, by the way, Happy Birthday! *hands out cake and cookies* You know, if you don't mind me saying so, your writing style is very mature and well-developed for a 13-year-old. Not to say there isn't always something that can be improved upon, but for your age, this is really quite marvelous. I really hope that doesn't sound too patronizing, because i totally don't mean it that way. Anyway, i believe i may have said it before, but i'll say it again. i'm really excited you're doing a iy/fb fic, and am looking forward to seeing where you're going to go with this. Your characterizations look like they're staying on target, for which i'm grateful. I guess what i'm trying to say is keep up the good work!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg that was the best inu/fb fanfict i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not kidding pls keep going you have made it so origional that it knocks my socks off wow pls keep going!!!!!!!!!!thanx for the enjoyment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 ! 1!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg that was the best inu/fb fanfict i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not kidding pls keep going you have made it so origional that it knocks my socks off wow pls keep going!!!!!!!!!!thanx for the enjoyment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sasuya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:24 CST
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Its really good! The first Inuyasha/Furuba fanfic that doesn't sound wierd...
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 20:40 CST
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hm..well i don't really know what you were talking about when you said the characters were going to be veryy OOC. They seem pretty well-portrayed to me, at least so far. Then again, there really hasn't been much interaction yet, so i'll reserve my final judgement. Other than that, I'm sooooo glad someone's writing a IY/FB crossover that looks like it might turn out to be more than a ridiculous piece of drivel. YOu have an original plot line (which, granted it would be hard not to considering the lack of iy/fb crossovers out there), and a writing style i can really get into. You haven't given everything away withing the first two chapters, making us wait to find out what exactly is going on. The only worry i have right now is that you're going to seriously rush the relationship between yuki and kagome. So, please PLEASE try to avoid that. Sorry, it's just that it's a huge pet peeve of mine. Along with the phrase "i seen it". bad BAD grammer. *shudders* ON that note, i haven't noticed any glaring grammatical or spelling errors, which is very refreshing. I also like your use of vocabulary. I'm sick of reading fics that sound like they were written for or by grade schoolers. BUt, you manage to avoid drifting to the other end of the spectrum and sounding like a walking websters. All in all, i think this fic has oodles of potential, and i personally can't wait for your next chapter. Make it a good one! Wow. longest review EVER!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! its a great story so far ^_^
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