| "The Royals of Atlantis" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I have totaly enjoyed my self while reading this story. I like the twists and you have made me laugh quite a bit. Keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Emerald Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've done an awesome job on this fic of yours,very well done indeed!
it was so very nice of you to leave off at such a good spot, so now you have to update very soon!!
by any chance, did you upload this fic on fanfiction.net also?? i could have sworn that i read the first couple of chapters this fic there too!
just wondering!
keep up the excellent work! i await the next chappie so continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Equinox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
What! You can't end it there. I've been waiting forever to read the next chapter. It was very good. I really ike where this story is going. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting storyline. I thought this would be centered around Queen Varie and her husband, King Goau. Can't wait to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Eternity-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2002 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....it's really amazing! I was expecting to see the rest of the first chapter after reading the prophecy....but then it ended! How could you? Lol. I'll have to read the second chapter next time. Brilliant; keep writing ok! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Equinox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story it is very beautiful. Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome like i sez b 4 but i hope it gets continued coz i can't wait |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
no dought another dilly's gal [i jus shortened it 4 no particular reason] original creation totally |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2002 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok this is the only time i am going to coment on my fic. And its directed to Dee chan. Thanks for your help in showing certain errors but pleae do not send them to me the changes in the reviews. It spoils the chapters for other people. If u want to send me them please send the file or email to dilandaus_girl@yahoo.co.uk. Thank you. Hell aka Dlandaus_lover/girl |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2002 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
If you'd like I'll be willing to beta a lil for the chapters I missed (I'm a bit too lazy to read em now *sdrop*). |
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 10:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you got this updated. Very good character developement. I like seeing the shader side of Fanelia, and Marcus, I would like to see more of him. Between this and By the Hand of Destiny (shameless self promotion on joint fic) I don't know how you find the time. Keep it up
Mam |
Reviewed By: Abby On: December 27, 2001 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
It's great!!! I loved it!!!!!! Hurry and finish it please!!! Thanks!! |
Reviewed By: Phantom Angel On: November 05, 2001 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my... oh my my..... do i like this? yes i do... it's amazing! heh... i love it! you've got talent, and this fic's got lots of potential. wow.... i am impressed! hheh, just so you know, i'm angelfire_bear from your mailing list, but everyone knows me as Phantom Angel... it was just my yahoo account. that's all. but yeah, back to ur fic! my my! it's sooooooooo goooooood! i can't WAIT to read more! so hurry please! wow!!! it's great!!!!!! *claps hands in excitement* |
Reviewed By: Otaku-hime On: November 05, 2001 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
*stares blankly at screen in shock*
*shakes head*
Wowwwwwwwwwwww..... deep. Very deep. Moving. Dramatic, but not too dramatic. Intense. Fierce. Powerful. Emotional. *sigh* I guess I'll have to stop there- my vocabulary isn't large enough to think of that many words to describe the story. Please, please, please, keep writing so I won't die of suspense? Pretty please? |
