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| "Desperate For Reviews!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot with honesty, and the little mesaage tords the readers at the bottom Nice! lol other than that it was both good and very sweet.
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
short yeah, but cute all the same, *grins* word is stupid, but with something so short you could of said it in the authors notes
| Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Indeed it was a little short, and the interruption was a bit... well, irritating, I liked it. No too bad, why don't you go and write some more?
| Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 09:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. I'm confused as to why it's rated R. Not bad for your first yaoi fic, but it was a little short. And somewhat confusing. If you're trying to write a romantic scene I would recommend not interrupting it with comment, no matter how tempting it may be, it ruins the mood. and I'd say you need more practice, so keep writing and I'll keep an eye out for your stuff.
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