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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What happened to Heero and what made Wufei scream? You gotta update soon! I have gotta know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: JASR On: April 27, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this fanfiction and it is a good suspense driven story. I cannot wait until you have another update and we all find out what secrets are hidden in the house.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 21:36 CDT
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*squeals in happiness* an update! Trowa needs to drag Wuwu with him so that he can apologize to Duo then he should go to Quat. While all this is going on, what's happening to Quat? Atlease his room is nearby and they can get to him when they hear him scream. And the cute on Wu's hand... old but he had just got it. Damnit they're unknowingly feeding the enemy their blood and fears.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 17:50 CDT
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Wow, you've been busy. Last time I checked on this Q was having a nervous break down. I really like it. Is there something about the bathroon that makes everything go loco? Or is it the whole cabin? I feel sorry for Heero. He seems so lonely. I hope Duo can make him feel better.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 18, 2005 04:00 CDT
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Wow Zakai *glomps* it was worth the wait!!!!! I can't wait for more!! I don't understand whyyyy Wu went for the freakin' stool!!! if it was too high he could have climbed up onto a counter to get to it, that is sure as hell a lot faster than going for the stool especially when your comrade/friend is bleeding and in freakin' shock on the 'cold' floor upstairs!! I say trowa should have stayed and squeezed some sense into Quat, let him know that he wasn't lying, cuz something is obviously tormenting the blond and he all clamy pale like Heero but more so. Despite his yell, trowa shoule have stood his ground and presisted in finding out what was wrong. man... now have to wait for the next update cause I don't want to keep talking so that i'm babblinf well like I'm doing right now. *grins* more please!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 03:10 CST
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Yea an update!! Oh no that stubborn heero!! And he's going to fall through to the attic where they couldn't get into I think... oh what's in there? And Trowa, i hope he's ok. Quat!!! Damn it Quat don't give in!! you're a freakin G-boy! Go zero on the damned ghost and tell Duo your suspicions! Or go to the attic and help Heero!! 'cuz I'm sure you'll hear him fall if the house doesn't let anyone else hear it. More please!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 13, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yikes! That last part was freaky. *shivers* Anyway, please keep going! I like this! The part with Heero giving Duo the bed and putting his blanket on him was too cute!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 03:55 CST
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Reflection's doors opening and closing on their own, that's some pretty freaky shit. Do write more I have to know what things happen to everyone!! Yay ^_^
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 06, 2005 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is really cool so far, so please keep going! I don't usually like supernatural/scary (that sounds childish, ne?) fics, but I really do like this one.
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Reviewed By: peril On: March 02, 2005 03:59 CST
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Good story thusfar! I like the thriller-ish atmosfere. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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hmmm... i think Duo should go spend the night with kittyQuat, he could use the company. If he choses Heero then maybe he can apologize for hurting his feelings. But it's possible that heero got into the actic and the bedroom light being in is distraction tactic so the others don't think that he's still working with his antenna thing for his computer? Quat needs to eat!!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel - - On: February 23, 2005 18:46 CST
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Dang it! i don't want Quat to suffer alone... but until something serious happens to one or more of the other guys he doesn't have much of a chance in convincing them other wise, although Duo and tro-chan will believe him more than the other two. glad you updated!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:58 CST
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You will write more now! So there!! This is cool and I'd love to see where you go with it. Happy day ^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 00:25 CST
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Hey i'm sure he could tell Duo!!! He'd understand, cuz i'm sure Duo will start to pick up on the strange things that Quat's sensing, prehaps even see them *wags brow, haha can one wag a brow? quirks brow* I so hope you decide to continue, i'd like to see how this story grows. And hey no rating yet, if ya want one you have to give me atleast... hmm lets say five to ten chapters *snickers evily*
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