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Reviewed By: nightcrawls [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was some story! i was so sad when u killed off most of the guys, i needed a tissue for that part, but to make it out to be a ill induce dream? that was fantastic, i think this is my fav! you get a very very VERY! big cookie ^_^
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 21, 2006 08:56 CST
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This was quality! Creepy, horrific and suspenseful, I'm still not sure what just happened, but it was great. Haha...
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Title: Dead Ground: The truth ( Chapter 14 )
Reviewed By: nightcrawls [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update this? *_*
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Reviewed By: Tuatha On: August 27, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I'm on chapter thirteen and just wanted to say your story is AMAZING! And totally addictive. Traditionally vampires are unable to enter your home unless you invite them.
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Title: Dead Ground: The truth ( Chapter 14 )
Reviewed By: nightcrawls [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 13:53 CDT
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wow now that was a clif hangger! I can't wait for the next chapter! i'm at the edge of my seat right now waiting, wanting to know what happends next! so please don't keep me waiting for long!!.. -*_*-
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Reviewed By: Bend and Snap On: August 23, 2005 12:45 CDT
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You've got me at the edge of my seat. Hurry and let us know what's going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 11:09 CDT
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Well...I don't remember, whether I reviewed this at FFn, but I love this story. Love ghost/horror stories. There's this feeling of desperation...Perhaps they won't make it out..? Who knows... (Well, technically, you do. A-ha-ha..!^^')BUT. Your writing's improved from the beginning. Definitely. And I love Quatre, and his indecision, now this sudden bust of firm resolve. Can't wait for more. Have to 'cause you won't update, but... Other stuf comes first, I get that... :D
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Reviewed By: melaniehibiki @ yahoo . de On: August 21, 2005 16:16 CDT
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Wow, that was -and still is- incredibly scary stuff. You write better horror than Stephen King, IMHO. I'm dying to find out why Duo isn't affected by whatever evil thing is in that cabin. And by the way, abandoned cabins in the woods have been scary to me ever since seeing "Evil Dead". Waaahh, I don't know how I'm possibly going to be able to go to sleep tonight. Especially since this isn't finished yet and the tension is killing me. Please update soon? Soo as in, today or tomorrow, preferably ^_^
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Reviewed By: (Weissangel24) On: July 24, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, you have me severely creeped out! I don't usually read/watch this type of story, but yours just dragged me in. Please, you must continue soon or I'll freak out! Update soon! Weissangel24
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Title: Eek
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 10:56 CDT
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Fantastic. That's the best word to describe this fic. Absolutely fanflippingtastic. LOL while I was reading this, the door slammed shut for no reason that I could see... Scared the hell out of me. ^^;; I honestly couldn't move for like, five minutes. Then I discovered my parrot had flown into the door and that was what had caused it. Yeesh... Anyway, you have to write more!!! Please? How come you said in one of the later chapters, can't remember which one, that Duo wasn't affected by the cabin, but then in 'Candles' he had that nightmare/vision thingy? Or was that not really the cabin, properly? I don't know... Maybe it wasn't Duo you were talking about? I can't remember whether his name was actually mentioned... *Shrugs* I don't know. Update soon! *Throws muffins*
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Title: Good~!
Reviewed By: Crazy_Violinist On: June 25, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good! I couldn't stop reading. It kinda gives me the chills, see I myself am in a cabin, but unlike them I have forms of communication, but it got me thinking. It scared the f--- out of me>
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Title: Oh My Lord...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 22:46 CDT
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So, what brought this on? This reminds me of a story called The murder of THe Crows. I don't think it's on this site, but this is a great thing! It's nothing like the other things i've read like this. Continue this, please.
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:57 CDT
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I just stumbled upon this story and all I can say is wow! This is a really good suspense/thriller story. I can't even been to really guess what is going to happen next. Keep up the hard work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:36 CDT
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0_o Who are they? And what was that man talking about? I'm confused as hell. Finish! Update! Do something!!!!! *smack* Ok, I'm better. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 08:10 CDT
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O_O I was reading this and the light bulb in the room went out. Needless to say, I screamed like a biotch! Anywho, update soon. This is soooooo good.
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