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| "No Matter Where You Go, There You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: CarlaS. On: March 02, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know how proud you are of this fic, and you have every right to be. It's not easy for us Vegeta worshippers to see Goku in a sexual way, but you DID meet the challenge and you far exceded every expectation. Great Job!
| Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 07:43 CST
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You know, for a confessed trollaholic, you sure have got our boy down pat... "Yeah, every time I used to come home before--you know, from the woods or from the dead--" Right there - that is the essence of why we Girls of Son LOVE him!! The sheer mind-boggling casualness of equating being dead with a day in the woods...that coupled with his enchanting naivete makes him utterly irresistable! Well that and he's really handsome with a killer body... :D O.o Oh dear... praising the brat too much... his grumpy old father suddenly feels the need to remind me just who the sexiest Son (honorary) is... Tch, me and my big mouth... *Grins from ear to ear*
| Reviewed By: Tempest/Tempting On: February 23, 2005 05:14 CST
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That was absolutely perfect. I think you captured Goku's personality exactly. Personlly, I can't stand the man, but somehow you made him appealing. I can almost see why Chi-Chi loves him. Excellent work.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 02:36 CST
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("*Drawn* without a single flaw." *giggles*) That was beautiful! Goku is supaa sexy even when smelling of fish. ^^ I liked the inclusion of King Kai dispensing fatherly advice to Goku, though he seemed creepily voyeuristic when watching Goku naked. The emotions of the couple were apt, Chichi feeling old and no longer desirable, and Goku's wistful sorrow about still not being able to understand his wife or the rest of the human world. At the end they proved they still didn't understand each other, but could love each other anyway. Interesting insight from Goku that he didn't miss his loved ones because he always felt they were there with him. The levitating objects during the lemon were a fabulous touch- I don't think I've ever seen that done before. Also loved the part about Goku's skin having a glow from being dead so much, and the "I figured I would get you to yell at me sooner or later." line. LOL Great job!
| Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:11 CST
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How do you do this? How do you keep getting me, the confirmed yaoi-aholic to read het - and like it. Your Goku is so sweet and naive, but sincere. Even Chichi is a nice person now. I like how you explained how Goku could be away and not have it bother him. And yes - I recognized the quote - one of my fav movies. Go Yoyodyne!
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best CC/G fics I've ever read. I think you've captured their relationship perfectly. I never could imagine Goku and Chi-chi having a sex life, and in all of the Cc/G fics there was always something not quite right, or something missing. This one was great thought. People think Goku's character is so easily potrayed, but I think that it is quite the oposite. Goku has two personalities that are very different and so it's hard to write a fic about his personal life and have the two personalities run togather, so you end up with either a really dopey Goku, or an all serious Goku. But I think in this fic you've entwined both of these personalities perfectly, everything about this fic felt genuine. Not an ounce of OCness. And it was superbly written as well. If your this good at a one-shot, then I am definetly going to try some of your other stories. You've done an exellent job! *author+ story to favourites*
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