| "Goku Meets Inu-Yasha" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: selentis-neko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz update
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Title: Goku Meets Inu-Yasha
Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome. i love it. i hope you will continue with this fic. i think this is an overal good fic.
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Reviewed By: lacy On: September 01, 2005 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
why do your muses keep dieing, all of mine last for however long i want them? well, hope you find your muse o and UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE
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Reviewed By: Melmara On: August 24, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good i hope ur muse doesn't die so quickly next time. i need longer chapters!!!!!!!so long
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Title: i reviewed happy?
Reviewed By: Penguin dude On: August 10, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* one day...I like it a lot...but I feel things are rushed like aliens r chasing you...i hope not :P
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Del, DUH On: July 18, 2005 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"HA!!!" This time Inu-Yasha concentrated harder and produced a larger beam (A/N: about the size of a wide coffee can) and hit the demon directly in the chest, going through the heart. "You-You can do that?" "Ka…me…ha…me…HA!!!!!" Sessho-Maru mimicked Inu-Yasha, but nothing happened. Goku meanwhile was trying desperately to keep from laughing out loud, Inu-Yasha didn't even try. LMAO!!! OH btw MY Sesshy does NOT run away...other than that, good story...well chapter...well...figment of you imagination...ill shut up now...
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Title: none
Reviewed By: Inyoku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOO THIS IS SOO COOL!!! Inuyasha's got saiyan blood now! This a wonderful story so far! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok so the story lines aren't perfect, still a great story! I hope this is updated soon (its in my favorites)....Ja
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Title: MORE PLEASE
Reviewed By: QUICKSTRIKE On: June 19, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS IS SO AWSOME YOU HAVE GOT TO WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: uhh
Reviewed By: mistressofmoonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
u messed up big time. I really don't think Goku would just sit there and power up, and I really think ur making him out to b a little TO strong. Seeshy probably would run away, but first he would fight and gauge Goku's power. You need to add more description and info. Goku said, Goku said, Goku said, after everything Goku says gets anoying and illeterate. The WHOLE group can sense power, you really need to do more research. And F.Y.I, u said Goku would have to go to a time and place way different from where he lives? GOKU LIVES IN JAPAN! That's teh same, exact place! Take it from me, I've been watching Inu for dang near 6 years and I've seen every episode in teh whole DBZ series even in the DBGT! U need to do more research before writing more, just to save urself humiliation! OMG, it's not called a monkey that Goku turns into, it's an ozaru! When vegeta is possessed by baby, it clearly says he's a vegeta-baby- OZARU! get it right, get it straight, or get out!
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Title: Ryoko Blue
Reviewed By: Ryoko001 On: April 20, 2005 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, if you make the chapters longer it would be really cool.
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Title: dude!!!
Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is going very cool so far!!! i love inuyasha and the whole dragonball saga!! hurry and write the next one!! plz!!
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Title: Please Writet
Reviewed By: ff fdgsghdsgfbgfbgbffggfbf On: April 01, 2005 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please !
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