Title: average
Reviewed By: VendettaTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
No great, not bad. Average high school teenager angst story. Follows kindas standered, girl breaks up with boyfriend, girl meets guy better than old boyfriend, they start going out, guy and girl are seperated by a fight or something, girl relizes that she loved new boyfriend, they get back together, happy ever after. So if you can throw in a wicked plot twist that'd be a help to your story. You got more visits than my story and as of now the same amount of reviews. Keep writng dude!
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