| "How to Love an Angel..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kopperia-no-Hitsugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww..... that is so sad . poor yue. aesome job. please make yue better!
|
Reviewed By: Lina Inverse the Dramata On: July 08, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh wow, that fifth chapter was dark. Poor Yue. That is soooo heartbreaking. I get why Kero went off like that. That poor Tenshi made for that. *shakes head* That's a twisted way of explaining his beauty and such. *SIGH* WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! Make him better! Okay that sounds odd I know... But you know what I mean. Ooo have Sakura be a help! She cares for Yue too (well, friend wise in your story obviously) and she IS supposed to be more powerful then Clow was... well... depending on which part of the series your at. So probably could do something to help. To, I dunno, make Yue his own person. Good luck with whatever you write, and watch your spelling, there were quite a few errors. Lina_Inverse_The_Dramata@yahoo.com
|
Reviewed By: FairyMage (not logged in... ^^) On: April 24, 2005 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww... poor Yue... -hugs- But Touya will make everything better! That's why I love Touya... ^^
|
Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
KAWAII-NE!!! I never thought about Toya moving out... I guess, though, considering what he and Yukito do... -smirk- Yay so now that they're going to be LIVING together, does that mean... ? ^^ -squee!-
|
Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 03:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write more! I really like this story and would love to see where it goes.
|
Reviewed By: Remus On: February 25, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i really enjoyed your story the writing style was a like different but ok so could you write another chapter ?
|
Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep going. ^^ Keep an eye out for minor grammar and spelling errors, but I like the story so far. Yukito/Touya are the cutest pairing, and I like that you've pulled Yue into this... very interesting.
|
