| "Through The Deceptions" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: insane anime lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
ya know, this is actually pretty good. Just make sure to WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!!! So please up-date soon. it's a good story but the chapters are way too short
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^ IT A GREAT STORY BUT TO SHORT ^_^
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Title: her story
Reviewed By: trina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yur stlye of writing is very good along with spelling and grammer. don't worry i ain't no freakin smart person at time's. but i loved it. sorry if i spell anything wrong, cuz i'm from hawaii though, but creativity is really better than some i've read but hey it's a good just keep going k?
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Title: her story
Reviewed By: trina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yur stlye of writing is very good along with spelling and grammer. don't worry i ain't no freakin smart person at time's. but i loved it. sorry if i spell anything wrong, cuz i'm from hawaii though, but creativity is really better than some i've read but hey it's a good just keep going k?
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