| "Best Laid Plans" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Just a random person On: July 08, 2015 23:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a lot like another fiction I've read before. it was good one
the less but I'm just saying...
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Reviewed By: violetvixen On: September 18, 2010 18:41 PDT
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request: sequel please! this was so unbelievably fuckable, I can't stand it! love your stories, going to read more right now~!
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Reviewed By: Syrus On: July 18, 2010 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I has sequel? (I know it's been half a decade, but still… pretty please??) This is the best fanfic I've yet to read, and that's really saying something.
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Reviewed By: kumfu On: June 05, 2010 07:18 PDT
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Oh, et j'en profite : je te mets donc en auteur favori via ffnet.
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Reviewed By: kumfu On: June 05, 2010 07:17 PDT
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Oh, j'ai adoré ! C'était excellent : très bien écrit, marrant comme tout, inventif (oui, le sexy-jutsu, on a déjà vu, mais ta façon de traiter le sujet est originale). Vraiment excellent, j'ai eu énormément de plaisir à lire ta fiction. Quelque-chose que j'avais déjà remarqué dans l'autre OS que j'ai lu de toi et que je remarque encore ici : la caractérisation des personnages. Non seulement les caractères sont bien respectés, mais leurs actions semblent logiques : à partir du moment où la base que tu as instaurée est posée, tout coule de source, tout semble se suivre naturellement sans qu'à aucun moment il y ait un temps de flottement ou un enchaînement d'action qui semble insuffisamment justifié. Chapeau. J'admire. Je trouve juste un peu pas juste que tu ne publies pas également tes fictions traduites en français ^^. C'est dommage. Ce serait très apprécié. Merci pour ce one-shot ! Et je lirai d'autres de tes fictions.
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Reviewed By: Raspberrii On: October 28, 2009 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE. Please write a sequel, omfg PUHLEAZE. :D
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: MistressArisa On: February 15, 2009 20:37 PST
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OMGOSH!! GENIUSNESS!! Honestly, I cam from ff.net where I am sasodei-iz-awesome and I LOVED THIS!!! I am so going to check out your other ficcies tmmr!!
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Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 22:31 PST
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Despite my usual dislike of Yaoi this was not only readable but fun to read! Amazingly good job!
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Title: O/////O
Reviewed By: Dakduif On: April 27, 2008 05:23 PDT
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... *nosebleed* You... you turned Sasuke into a wanton-slut. And a very kinky one as well. O.O And omg, your humor. I laughed só loud at times. xD mehehe, the Kiba thing was WIN. xD And the ending.. Waah, I guess we can only fantasize about what happens next. :P I've totally fallen in love with your writing. Crossed Wires was the first of your fics that I've read, now I started to pic up on all the one-shots, before continuing to reading Teamwork. :P Aahh... you make my lazy sunday afternoons more than worthwhile. :) *hugs you*
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Title: waahchaah!!
Reviewed By: mystic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! that was freaking awesome!!! i was laughing so hard i woke up my sleeping family hah!!!!!!! *favorited for all eternity*
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Reviewed By: Adele19 On: December 23, 2007 22:02 PST
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"Condoms=sex Yep, still listening." Best line ever...I was cracking up when I read that. Great job!
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Reviewed By: yaoiqt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great. and since you put the idea out there could you do the naruto one. paleeze
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't my first time reading it. I just love it so much that I keep on going back to it. I've never really thought of Naruto useing his jutsu that way with Sasuke, and it was absolutely hilarious watching him talk to Sasuke drunk. But I'm absolutely begging you!! You just have to make another lemon to this!! Or at least write more like these! They're just too awesome to read! But nothing with Sakura. She's bad for Sasuke and Naruto and I don't like her.
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Reviewed By: LunayaWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 14:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmm...hot and spicy, just the way I like it...made me laugh quite a but : ) I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Now, pardon me while I drag my very wiling fence to the bedroom.
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Reviewed By: natOfbar On: April 15, 2007 01:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU COULD FUCK ME SENSELESS. THIS IS THE BEST SHIT IVE READ IN A WHILE!!!! XDDXD ITS HILARIOUS i LOVE sasuke as a GIRL whoo.that was too hot.
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