| "Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: hey this is good
Reviewed By: lilbloorose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.... don't tell me that you aren't going to write another chapter you need to this story is really good and i nnnneeeddd to know what happens next please write i am sorry if i am being rude but i need to know please
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Reviewed By: sasukes_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SWEAE IF I- NO IF U DO NOT UPDATE MY LIFE WILL BE OVER!! PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!! I LIKE THE IDEA OF SAKURA BEIN THE FULL KNOW IT ALL WOO HOO GO YOU!!! PLZ UPDATE
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Reviewed By: francine_aogiri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the cutest chapter ever!!! it really made me cry though... hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Urufu-chan On: July 11, 2005 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very awesome, but I think more romance between Sakura and Itachi would be good, sense we rarly get to see any of that in other fanfics.
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Reviewed By: ShirachiChan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wee!Now,Update!^-^Hehe!
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Reviewed By: nuelle On: April 16, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 reason i like it, because you made sakura not defenseless.Another is that, well, i don't know.... ijust like it.
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Reviewed By: nuelle On: March 29, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lik the fanfic becuse of Sakura's character.
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Reviewed By: sazchankagebunshinojitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the idea of iatchi leaving with sakura, brilliant idea, im a total sasu/saku lover so pleeeeeease have some cool stuff with them, overall very cool
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Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't bad so far. I love the plot, and I don't think that she's too much of a know-it-all. She has done most of this stuff before... I would say that the only problem is with your grammar. I have the same problems too, so don't worry.
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