Reviewed By: Kieri [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 11:27 CST Comment/Review: I have to say, this story is really cute! You've picked an original way of telling the saga which gives the reader a new (and welcome) viewpoint. Trying to explain technicalities to kiddies can be a hassle, but in this case its fun. The competing Goku v. Piccolo idol worship is a very nice touch! I'm looking forward to reading your next chapters :-)
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