| "two family unight" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: InuKagz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE 4 GODS SAK!!!!! i luv this fic but u need to continue
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Title: WAIT
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Am I your only review? Wow!! I was the 1st one yay!! I mean congradulations you now have two reviews!!! *men in white suits come and take me to a room with white walls*"This jacket makes me hug myself!! Oh well bye work on that spelling!!"
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Title: spelling
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont always do this to people but,your story was great and all it's just you have a spelling problem just try and fix it ok!?
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