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| "A Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kots On: February 23, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Takato and Beelzemon. I like the pairing ^^ I like how you got them drunk and they don't even remember doing anything, it's funny when that happens to people. Though why would Impmon digivolve for a party? That's the only thing I thought weird. Also it would have been nice to know who else was making out with who ^^. Keep up the good work.
| Title: YAY! ^_^
Reviewed By: AbeoUmbra On: February 23, 2005 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome begining you guys! ^_^ I you get the next chapter up soon! *hint hint* lol ^_^ Anyway, I don't have an acount here yet, but I might soon. I mainly haunt FanFiction.Net, lol. Now lets see, loved the agast of both charactors in the begianing seems that B would be the one to wake up and 'run away' first. But who where those other people who paired up at the party that both Takato and B mentioned, new pairings-besides the obvious one? This sorta seems like a AU for some reason or other, kinda has that feeling about it even though everything from the Digimon Tamers timeline so far mentioned is normal. Hmm why did I rate it like I did? Lets see, style is good, spelling and grammer? Don't see any bad mistakes. An as for Originality, few brave authors have ever attemped this pairing even though I love it. Enjoyment? Well it made me think and get up the nerve to write a review at a web-page I've never been to before, so that says something. So I'm pleased with everything so far so you get a overall 10. ^_- Take care, and do post agian soon! AbeoUmbra!
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