| "Oh my God Ranma!!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: u bitch On: August 01, 2005 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
rama sucks
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Reviewed By: ChaosRune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you stared the fic with making Ranma a God in training, for no purpose that I can see so far. Also you need to refer to Ranma in feminine when hes in his cursed form, because because it gets confusing and sometimes I dont know if hes in his cursed form or not. Otherwise the fic looks really good, so I hope to see more of it
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Reviewed By: Lord Helpme On: June 13, 2005 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. That's what it could be, anyway, with some extensive proofreading.
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Title: So So
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read through it and I have to say it's pretty good so far, but you need to do a few things with the story. You don't keep facts straight as you right. I'd be you go days without writing on this fic and you forget some of the little facts. There were several things that you would mention and then completely forget about later on in the story. Like how Ranma was in the bathroom when the stone's creation process was described and later on he knew it. or when Ranma left Nabs on the counter and never came back for it, but had it with him a little while later. Do a preread of the story and edit it for mistakes and story flow.
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Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is creative and original. I like the combination of anime and the crossover elements actually make (semi)-sense. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Do continue even I don't read the Full Metal manga more that the 2 bro just going to repair arm. Hey do Urd going to jump in as the Goddess of Love give her blessing to those who do anything for their love say give that man's lover to extend her live for another 10-20 years? Just an idea. WRITE ON!
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