Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is great, I'm writing a story similar to this right now (not copying, honest!) but in mine there is another reason for Vegeta hitting Bulma. I don't know why nobody else has reviewed this, and I agree it is a lot better then some of the fics I've seen with like 20 reviews. Maybe it's you summary? NEway, I'm reading, so please,please,please contine!
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