| "Split-Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: interesting
Reviewed By: EmErAlDdRaGoN699 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good, but you should fix it a little and change some phrazing so its better to understand. the whole picture is missing cuse there is grammer and phrazing problems. but i liked it still. keep it up and i hope for another chapter. EmeraldDragon
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm there's some odd phrasings. Ran a hand through his head? Did you mean hair love? I liked
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