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Title: The Usual (aka awesome)
Reviewed By: Tergar of konoha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah another one of you good ones. I finally stopped being a purist to a almost anti PG site and here I am. I digrees. Anyway I'll admit I'm a porn-aholic, but this surpassed and exceeded my expectations. I really shouldn't be surprised considering the source. The character build-up was phenominal for a one-shot, and it certainly was an interesting take on the PG universe.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kerosaohco [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story line. The whole thing based on the need of a child. You written the story very well, and I hope to read more work from you. Keep at it! ;)
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Title: Pretty good
Reviewed By: jj0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said Bunny was 15, but she acted more like she was 10 or 12. Good story though.
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Reviewed By: daab On: March 04, 2005 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit I picked this story for the porn. It turned out to be a bit diferent then the average p.g. fic. The fact that a 5' nothing wife holds this kind of power over these girls brought some perspective to the world that I really never took notice of before now. Where as all the other stories I've read in this genre revolve around some kind of dominace by the tamer, whether implied or demonstrated, she simply owns them. And that changed the whole tone of it for some reason which made it a much better read. Great job.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. My only complaint is that you really built up Constance and Natasha, but they barely got one scene of bed time sans diary. Perhaps a story in the same setting (not necessarily a sequel) could be in your future? Yes, maybe? Well as always, thanks for the memories.
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Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! 1st post! Nice story! Great plot going and characters are cool too. My favourite is Bunny as she is so clueless. I didnt notice any spelling or grammer errors so coodoes to you. Another Masterpiece!
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