| "Dark Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: goth_chick On: March 04, 2005 22:52 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the story so far, its great!! i think that you should give up on the reviews though because normally my friends and i just flame people for fun so if you get a flame dont say you wernt warned!! anyway i really think that it is good and it can go really far i also think that you should write longer chapters. so goodbye for now, i no longer have anything to read until you update ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chokolatte [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! please don't think this is a flame, it really isn't meant to be. I really like your story, and I think it can go far, it is just a little hard to read. I know from experience that this can turn off readers. I think you might need a beta (like a proofreader). I'd be willing to beta this story for you if you would like. Like I said, I really like it, it is just very hard to read. My friend and I beta each other's stuff, so I could totally do yours as well. Just think about it... like I said, I do really like this story so far. ~Chokolatte ;)
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Title: Mmm...
Reviewed By: Kores On: March 04, 2005 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that it is good overall. But try to becareful when you type and try more often to capatalize different words. Otherwise. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: flick On: February 28, 2005 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't like that your people cuse, but i'll let that go for now.. since i dont know much about this i'd say it's pretty darn good! whew hoo bring on chapter 3! :) ps see u tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: flick On: February 28, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this iis a little short
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