| "Hwoarang's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: justanotheralice [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all make spelling and grammatical errors. That's just life. We're all victims. Needless to say you're not the first girl to put herself in a fic so that lowers the orginality, but it's still early in the story. Perhaps you could do something that strikes a little creativity. I would definitely like to see more character development in the future if you continue. I am honestly not a big fan of these fics, but it seems pretty popular and it is definitely cute. I think you can do great things with this story. Continue to develop the relationship, add some depth, and you will definitely have a great fic. I give you a nine overall because you love to write and I want you to continue and improve your talent.
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Title: Hehe
Reviewed By: Mint Chocolate On: July 01, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehe fiancee, fiancee Hwoarang's got a fiancee!! *Giggle*
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Reviewed By: Deathbegrateful [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! How Adorable Hwoarang Geting a Fiance! It's wonderful! I think its Absolutely Darling! Okay so i don't Actualy talk like that but, I was Cute.
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Title: good... but
Reviewed By: kybo the terror (too lazy) On: June 18, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful! But you might want to take 'hentai' out of genre... just a thought...
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Title: Oh Dear
Reviewed By: TeKkEn On: May 27, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hwoarang is in DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP shit if the Tekkeners find out! Oh well his problem. Please update!!
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Title: ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Zaguro On: March 24, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! GO IMOTOUSAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yo,Nigga-lady person,if you've got a problem with my little sister's fic, you can take it up with me,FAT HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FTC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: YOU GO HWOARANG!
Reviewed By: I like Kitties On: March 23, 2005 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bitch nigga FUCK OFF! This is a good fic Neko! Hwoarang has a Fiancee! Lucky guy! Update!!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Yukino On: March 23, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! A New Tekken Fic!! I love it! bitch nigga doesn't know a good story when she sees one!! I like it!! Please update!!
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Title: GOOD FIC
Reviewed By: Hwoarang fan #2 On: March 22, 2005 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don;t listen to that bitch Niko-yasha!! I like it! Fuck off bitch nigga !!
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Title: Fuckin loser
Reviewed By: bitch nigga On: March 22, 2005 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get a life biatch
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Title: OH MY GOD
Reviewed By: Miss Fox On: March 13, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo funny!! You must like Hwoarang soooo much!! Update sweetie! This one of my new favorite romance you're writing!! Please update!! Love: Miss Fox
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Title: hahahahahahaha!!
Reviewed By: Chocolate Dargon from Hell On: February 27, 2005 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can see my sister got here 1st!! Oh, well! I like this fic!! Hwoarang having a Finacee is funny!! He's in deep shit if the Tekken Fighters find out!! Update ASAP!!!
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Title: TEKKEN!
Reviewed By: Umi Inu On: February 26, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You like Hwoarang a LOT! I like Jin!! Hehehe!! Steve is ok...Hwoarang is ok too, but Jins MINE!! Update please!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Kana (The 1st) On: February 26, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! Udate please!! I like your Tekken fics!
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Title: Haha
Reviewed By: Mint Chocolate On: February 26, 2005 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic please update!! It's funny that Hwoarang can't remeber a 5th grade promise!!
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