Reviewed By: baby_kitty_toes On: March 04, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story and how ed reacted to hi attaction to mustang by hooking up with every girl possible. But i don't think some who is in denial about an attaction to a man would think about being uke. I think it would have been more beliveable to have had ed finished durning the blowjob. If you wanted to have the whole smut scene, you would have been better off writing a second chapter that took place a few weeks later, after he's a bit more used to the idea. Still, i did enjoy the story.
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