Title: It's ok. Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 15:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Not one of your best storys, but I still like it. The only thing I really finde wrong with it is the way the story involves the chariters. still a good story line though. *^_~* please update soon!!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!*^_~*
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