Title: Holy Frack
Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: February 27, 2005 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. I especially liked the omake. Work on your grammar and paragraph structure a little, it seemed rushed (the story). Watch out for run-on sentences especially. Otherwise, very nice.
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