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Title: Love it.
Reviewed By: Youkai.Danni On: June 16, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly one of the most seductive chapter's that you have written. Sesshoumaru acts like a complete pervert with his thinking so very hot for his Oh, so cold character nice spice. I know people have been telling you to Update but I just have to say that I hope you update really soon! I am about to die from the suspence of not knowing what is going to happen next. Thank you for freeing me from my boredom ^.^ keep up the great work!
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 02:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Me Likey alot. I want you to continue this fic as soon as possible or I will not be responsible for my actions. LOL! just kiddin. No really please continue I like the flow
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Title: You disgust me
Reviewed By: You don't need to know On: April 16, 2005 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the nerve to steal other people's work. You disgust me. I'm going to notify the person's cousin who you stole it from to take you down. Honestly, that's all you deserv for what you have done!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: April 15, 2005 20:18 CDT
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hmm...i can't see kag and sessh going anywhere not dark in this. man...to be set up from teh start, that just ain't cool. i really hope that she at least stands up to his crap at some point and not just allows him to use her like a doormat. very well done, great story. intresting back story with inu's mom and sessho's dad. to be honest though, i think it might be a little misplaces. knowing the past is great, it realy helps out but you went from a raging Sessho emotion (a rare comodity at that, lol) to something that indirectly relates to him. a little choppy but still well written. good job with teh story thus far. keep it up!
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Title: Nice Story
Reviewed By: TweetyReview On: April 15, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story so far. It's quite original from the other highschool-based stories. Your writing is good and so is your development. I personally would enjoy it if Kagome were a bit more suspicious and not just some innocent-naive girl ( in this fic she's not,don't worry.) She should also accept dates from the other guys, just to make Fluffy jealous. LOL....I'm sorry- I love seeing guys jealous. You're a really unique writer, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: blobgurl On: April 15, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is so cool! Kagura deserves to be run over and shot.
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: DemonGoddessSlayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the same exact fic on A single Spark but it is done by different people...
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Reviewed By: TwilightZone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if this story has a happy ending...kagome will end up w/ sesshomaru won't she??? great story, keep writing, update soon!
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Title: yay updates!!!
Reviewed By: animefreak321654 On: April 03, 2005 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh so good , i love it love it love it!!!! you must must absolutly must update again soon!!!!PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: April 03, 2005 18:29 CDT
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hehe, opps, did Sesshiles make a mistake as to over judging kagome? opps? HEHEHE.good, someone needs to smack him off that damned twenty foot tower he has himself on. GRR. lol. great chapters and very well written. great job!!!
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 03, 2005 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow...i don't think i have ever hated sesshoumaru as much as i do right now. GOD, what a pretencious prick! ugh! she so should have purified him. i'm grabbing a hold of the fact that this is a fluffy/kagg fic, but thats cool. honestly though, Sessho's gang deserved to be lined up and shot! i love that you included bankotsu and jakotsu...you should so get them in on the ass kickings that NEED to happen. i swear, i want to beat the snot out of Sesshoumaru. i know i enjoy a fic when i seeth on one character, and let me tell you, i'm pulling my hair out over here. GOD, what scum bags! UGH!!!! Kagome better have a good sense over herself on this date or she is really gonna be hurt. where is inu to save the day? ::sighs:: damn kikyo....
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Title: your fan fic
Reviewed By: cher On: March 02, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! YOU GOT A MIX OF EVILNESS AND OLALA FIRST ONE IVE SEEN! WOW I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN WILL SPARKS FLY OR IS THERE AN EVIL APPROCHING !OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I CANT WAIT ,THE SUPENCE IS KILLING ME!
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Reviewed By: Silver wolf kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, please update soon. can't wait to see what sesshomuru has in mind for Kagome. Totally cool.
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