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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish I really love it pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update, and don't mind all those rude comments. Their just hating. its really good
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Reviewed By: Hopeless16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh, i love kagome/sesshomaru fics. i only with that you could have finished it. *sigh
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: llxsunset_mikixll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON THE STORY WAS JUST GETTING REALLY GOOD SO UPDATE.
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Title: Love it.
Reviewed By: Youkai.Danni On: June 16, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly one of the most seductive chapter's that you have written. Sesshoumaru acts like a complete pervert with his thinking so very hot for his Oh, so cold character nice spice. I know people have been telling you to Update but I just have to say that I hope you update really soon! I am about to die from the suspence of not knowing what is going to happen next. Thank you for freeing me from my boredom ^.^ keep up the great work!
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Title: Innocent Eyes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 02:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Me Likey alot. I want you to continue this fic as soon as possible or I will not be responsible for my actions. LOL! just kiddin. No really please continue I like the flow
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Title: You disgust me
Reviewed By: You don't need to know On: April 16, 2005 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the nerve to steal other people's work. You disgust me. I'm going to notify the person's cousin who you stole it from to take you down. Honestly, that's all you deserv for what you have done!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: April 15, 2005 20:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm...i can't see kag and sessh going anywhere not dark in this. man...to be set up from teh start, that just ain't cool. i really hope that she at least stands up to his crap at some point and not just allows him to use her like a doormat. very well done, great story. intresting back story with inu's mom and sessho's dad. to be honest though, i think it might be a little misplaces. knowing the past is great, it realy helps out but you went from a raging Sessho emotion (a rare comodity at that, lol) to something that indirectly relates to him. a little choppy but still well written. good job with teh story thus far. keep it up!
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Title: Nice Story
Reviewed By: TweetyReview On: April 15, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story so far. It's quite original from the other highschool-based stories. Your writing is good and so is your development. I personally would enjoy it if Kagome were a bit more suspicious and not just some innocent-naive girl ( in this fic she's not,don't worry.) She should also accept dates from the other guys, just to make Fluffy jealous. LOL....I'm sorry- I love seeing guys jealous. You're a really unique writer, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: blobgurl On: April 15, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is so cool! Kagura deserves to be run over and shot.
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: DemonGoddessSlayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the same exact fic on A single Spark but it is done by different people...
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