| "After an Afternoon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey again. i liked this one, but then i'm a fan of inu/kag pairings. i hope you do update this. it would be a shame not to.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: September 11, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more!I would so read it if you wrote more.
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Reviewed By: Feral Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this story was a total 10 in my eyes. I saw no flaws one bit. I loved it! It was so sweet and tender it made me want to snatch the story and snuggle with it in bed. (Not in that naughty way!) Your writing is superb. I throw in my vote for a sequel! I'd love to read one. Heee lovely!
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Title: That was really sweet...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed InuYasha and Kagome's interactions, as well as their in-characterness. I don't think it would take much to push those two a little closer. Very nicely done indeed. You have a colorful way of describing things that really bring it to life and make it easy to visualize. If you plan on writing more, It would be a privilege to read it.
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Reviewed By: ApAtHy aNgEl On: March 06, 2005 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah......you should.......so.....continue.....this........yeah......dude.......heh.... uPdAtE
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Title: After an Afternoon
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 07:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice and sweet story ^^ I really like it! Please keep writing!
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Title: So sweet...
Reviewed By: LadyAmarra On: March 06, 2005 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet... you really need to write some more... it's so cute and nice. Oh and the song you wrote about on the first page is not working. Just write song title and the group up that is easier for most people... hope for an update!!!
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