| "Lost on the Road of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: blizzardtorment [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:16 CDT
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its a great story.for chapter eight can you fix it the left side got cut off. hope you update soon ja ne
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 09:46 CDT
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Can you fix your most resent chapter some of it is choped and it is hard to read. By the way I love this story!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 17:37 CDT
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Chapter 8 has a formatting issue, the text goes beyond the left margin, and the beginning of each line is lost. Wanted to inform you of that. Also, I read this story before, and I like it a lot. Please correct the issue, ok? I'd like to be able to read the whole story.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 01:23 CDT
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the latest chapter is missing text on the left side of the screen, please correct this issue by reloading the chapter. Now, beyond that issue, I like this story, it gives a lot of background to the characters, and makes them more, interconnected, I should say, than they are in the anime. Clearly there is more going on between Iruka and Kakashi than is shown on screen, afterall. Anyway, I love the fic, and am looking foward to future chapters. Update soon, not in 2 years. Lol, jk, jk. Seriously though, keep writing, it's the only way to improve quickly.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
udate! please. it is so good. i mean driving Ero-sanin crazy. maybe you should do like whe he grows up. when he goes training with ero-sannin. that would be cool.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:32 CDT
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Please continue. I love it. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: princess_shirley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! when are you going to update?? its sooo good u should update!!! its soo cute!!! naruto is soooo cute!!! update soon =)=)
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I think it's really cute. You should up date it.
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Title: AH HAHA
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 28, 2005 13:54 CDT
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Naruto pee-ed on Jiraiya... XD
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Title: Post Script
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 03:08 CDT
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Oh, I just something I feel that I should add. If you ever find the time, read back over your first chapter. I remember it had a lot of errors. I think.
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Title: Not What I Expected
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, when I first read the title and summary, I thought the caretakers would be OCs. (No, I don't know why. And for some reason, I got a picture of two tiny, human-looking silhouettes standing against some mountains.) Usually, I hate it when there's an OC, and I stayed away from this story like the plauge. But, well, I don't know. Somehow, I ended up reading anyway. I was even dissapointed (!) when I found out who the main characters were. Even worse, there were major spoilers, right from Chapter One. (I think a warning might be helpful.) But in the end, I'm glad I read this story. I've been having a shitty day, and baby Naruto is exactly what I need. Thanks alot, and keep the updates coming. =)
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Reviewed By: karin On: June 24, 2005 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plez finish this story it is so good thanks
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Reviewed By: Moonlightwolfos On: June 20, 2005 14:27 CDT
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Hello I hope you will continue with this story for a enjoy it. As one of the very few I usally read please continue updating with it, for I would like to finish reading and see how it develops. ^___^ (if I had a account on here I would add your story as one my favourits but *sigh* sadly I don't. Keep up the good work, and sorry for any spelling mistakes and other things, deslexya is one of the troublesome things for me. *gives a small smile*)
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Title: kakashi's girl
Reviewed By: kodoku na kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 13:02 CST
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loooks good so far! update soon!!!!
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Title: Chappie 1
Reviewed By: Toboe-Chan On: March 10, 2005 22:03 CST
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Ooh! I hope that this gets updated soon! It's really good! Please update it as soon as you can, please?! ^-^
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