| "A True Love in the Hinata inn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Oi!
Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading that made my brain cells start a gang war and the survivors shot themselves. First of all, get a spell and grammar check program. Second, finish 1st grade. Third, *WTH* is up with the whole "I am Miroku and I suck donkey testicles" thing? I'm relatively sure that people get the reference, and if they don't, they probably don't care anyways.
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Title: very bad
Reviewed By: tremere [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
as TB said. Check your grammar and no capital letters. It´s too damn short.
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Reviewed By: Teloch On: September 08, 2005 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is fucking awesome you are the best writer in the history of english
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, normally I'm not the type that does scathing reviews. But this work is just absolute crap. Is your keyboard broken or something??? I *highly* recommend that you turn your CAPS LOCK off and rip the button off your keyboard. Then, complete 6th Grade English and attempt to write again. Maybe.
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Title: Dear Author
Reviewed By: TB On: June 10, 2005 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author... I recommend that you spend much more time than you did on this fic... Using big,capital letters made your fic hard to read and the chapters were insanely short with numerous spelling and grammatical errors. This fic could use a lot of improvement. -TB
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