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Reviewed By: Suki Itachi On: March 29, 2005 04:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! You can't stop now! I need to read the next chapter!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:24 EST
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I'm baaack! ^_^ Great chappie! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Holli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 18:22 EST
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You're horrible for barely mentioning Havoc and Ed in this chapter :) Now that I've told you that . . . Another fine chapter. I think that the fake will find the real thing hard to get rid of. And I'm continually impressed by your ability to make that crazy woman consitantly creepy. About the only thing I'd suggest you watch out for is over using the phrase "Ed and Havoc in darkness." It's not a big deal but I did notice it. In any case, it was a good couple of chapters since last time I reviewed and I'm looking foreward to your next one!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: March 22, 2005 20:22 EST
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*sighs* Ok, you really need to stop with these cliffhangers! What did they see, damn it!? I need to know! Now you need to update really fast so I can have an answer, ok?
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Reviewed By: AngelWings ((( not logged in))) On: March 22, 2005 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo!!! Not the evil cliffe of doom!!! I was really into the story too!!! You MUST UPDATE as soon as possible. I have to know what they saw staring back at them. Is it Ed and Havoc or maybe the chimiras or or... I dont know but please update soon that I can find out. This fic really grabs your attention!!! That lady is CRAZY!!! I cant believe she... with Havoc and Ed was right there. I cant imagine how horrible Ed felt and Havoc. Update soon!!! Until then... Happy Writings ^_~
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Title: questions
Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: March 17, 2005 17:41 EST
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okay...so woodgrove is 'mommy'...but who's gene havoc? I have only seen a few episodes of fma and not that familiar with names yet...
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:00 EST
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So... Woodgrove is the crazy chick who kidnapped Ed? Grrr... youre confusing, But it's an AWESOME story.
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Reviewed By: Holli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 19:58 EST
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The thing with Marcus was pretty creepy all right. I didn't notice a difference with the quality. Again, good work. I'll be looking forward to when you update!
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Title: Replacement
Reviewed By: Mistress of Shadows On: March 16, 2005 16:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ed even poor Havoc you certainly know how to make someone be crazy, I loved it I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:39 EST
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yay! ^_^ now Ed won't catch a cold (going commando will do that to ya)...anyways, my guesses on who will be joining him are either his brother Al, or the guy who snaps his fingers and makes flames appear...is that roy mustang? I know it's sad, but I can never remember his name ^_^
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Reviewed By: Holli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 21:44 EST
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Wow, you are certainly evil! This is a very interesting story so far - who doesn't like a story where a character is chained up by a psycho? And I have to say that I'm impressed with the chacterizations and detail. I'll be looking forward to finding out who's going to be keeping Ed company :)
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: AngelWings ((( not logged in))) On: March 07, 2005 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I thought "Last Glimpse of Hope" was bad... This tops them all!!! I must admit this is a real attention grabber. I feel soooo soooo sorry for Ed. And that woman... She's ust crazy! What the hell is wrong with her?! I hope I dont have any nightmares any time soon @_@. Anywho this fic is certainly original. I've been reading one with Yoko Kurama, Kuruone, and Yomi using female humans as sex slaves. Which is a really good fic by the way, but this one just blows my mind. You certainly have a gift. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Until then... Happy Writings!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:40 EST
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^_^ It's so twisted! I love it! I would say your a jerk for keeping him in the basement, but if you make the next chappie even weirder, I'll forgive you. ^_^ I'm so sadistic....
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Reviewed By: Kakarots-Frying-Pan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeee! I love it~! I hope to read more soon~! ^-^ It is quite twisted, but totally possible. It's very original, never seen a fic like this one. Hope you update soon, I'm really enjoying this ^-^ ~♥~ Li
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:09 EST
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More! I need to know what happens next! Please update soon. Such a great story, and so twisted....great job!
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