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Reviewed By: Sesshy85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2011 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story detailed entertaining just as I always expected it with full metal and loads of intense scenes |
Title: last chapter
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OI poor ed! love it so far@!
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Title: Enitre Night of Love
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit. Now I remember why I like the long ones. Although, your style is pretty basic, your story-telling style is great, in my opinion. It was well-paced and made me really think hard. In fact, I stayed up all night to read it! Thanx for the insomnia. next
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Reviewed By: queenserena(not signed in) On: July 23, 2005 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffs and claps*You should put a warning before the last chapter! At least my family wasn't inside when I read this last chapter...*cries more*I want more! It was so sad, and sweet...*wails*
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 09:40 EDT
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Oh my god! This story is sick and twisted...yet oddly csptivating... I just read the whole thing and I'm in love!! I'm waiting for the next chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: Akira Suzuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 06:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! Poor Edward. I really thought he was gonna be saved but no, *Tear.* He must indure more torture. Only on chap three but still reading....
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Reviewed By: Sado-Yasha On: June 05, 2005 01:29 EDT
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I had mixed feelings about this fic. Mostly I was confused, then frustrated that everything I came up with was wrong, then the story didn't move fast enough, then I felt bad for Ed, (as always) and then you tied another knot in the story that confused me all over again. The only real criticsm I had was the jumping around like crazy thing. I get totallly lost when people do that. And repetitive phrases. I noticed a few phrases are favorites of yours. ~_^ The overall story line (once I finished) turned out pretty good. You are definitely good at hiding things and then jumping out at us like that. You hid your bases pretty well. And I know you told us to back off, even at the end, I still found quite a few grammatical errors. I'd suggest having someone else proofread your stuff before posting if you haven't already had someone doing so. (And remember this is coming from someone who read this a couple days ago so... yeah....) Good job on the story though! Keep up the writing. You are one who should.
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:38 EDT
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*sigh* that was great, and even though i've yet to see the end of the show i'll still read your epilogue, simply because spoilers don't bother me, i'll still enjoy the show even if i know what's gonna happen....bring it on i say, *big smile* great ending chapter though, i love how ed and angel got to cry together, they needed it i think, update asap, till then, Zirra
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: didn't sign in On: May 24, 2005 21:14 EDT
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this was a wonderful chapter and in answer to your question i say more....more i say we want more please tell us more.....i want to know what happens to angel and everyone else....update asap PLEASE,
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 18:09 EDT
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no i have gotten quite used to your style, and as such, never "expect" anything, but rather wait to see were you take me :D i love this story...i hate that maes died in the anime >
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: May 10, 2005 19:32 EDT
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yay another chappie! ^-^ i was shocked, but not really 'cause I figured that it was a family member...anyways, I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather...it's always hard to lose someone you love hope ya update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 15:01 EDT
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oh thiss was awsomely awsome. fantasticly fantastic...i can't think of any more words to do like taht...oh well, great chappy, i knew it wasn't any of the "known" suspects i just couldn't guess who it was sorry about your grandpa, i know how it feels to lose a loved one, my great grandma just died about a year ago. she was the only person on my mom's side of the family who really liked us kids(me my bro and my sis) everyone else nearly hated us and our mom. be lucky your family isn't as twisted as mine.*sigh* anyways please update asap. i need to know what's gonna happen next!!!!! Zirra
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 17:07 EDT
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I really must be twisted...I actually enjoy cliffies. Anyways, I love the story and can't wait for the conclusion.
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Reviewed By: To The Evil Cliffie Woman On: April 25, 2005 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EviL! EVIL! EVIIIIIIIIILLLLL!! Your evil, I tell you! You damn cliffie woman! Oh I must know when the next chappie comes out! I shall watch this story VERY closely! Great work! Update soon!
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