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| "Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: celineneo On: June 17, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when can u updated?i want to read the ending!
| Title: Note:
Reviewed By: This is the author On: March 29, 2005 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This story has three mates for Sess and it is not finished yet so the "ending" isn't the ending.
| Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In your summary it said four mates. But in the story, I only got three, did I miss one? And no spelling errors, which it great. I hope you eventually decide to write a sequal, because it was sortta a cliff at the end. It was ok, even though there was not that much lemony content. But I think you have a lot of potential.
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