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| "Inuyasha, Kagome and the Festival of the Dog Ears" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:52 CDT
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WOW luved it please write more chapters!!!
| Reviewed By: ANightWalker2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO HEART YOUR STORIE!!! so so SO cute lots and lots of fluff!!! please that was auwsome storie
| Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh come on girl, you cant leave us hanging there...is it a boy or a girl, what does it look like, do they stay in feudal or modern Japan, is the jewel complete??? too many unanswered questions plzzzz do a sequal *puppy eyes*
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 12:54 CST
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You shuld write a sequel. This is good. see-ya! Zirra
| Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 08:04 CST
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice job! Opening the story w/such fire...::fans herself::--good thing you'd also provided a bath,faucet w/cold water for myself after our beloved Kagome and Inuyasha exited the room! :) Kawaii scenes...Inuyasha in a black tank w/olive cargo shorts *and* red bandana? Oh, yeahhhhhh...I'd also enjoyed the beautiful kimonos you'd garbed Kagome in. That festival was such a terrific concept--I chuckled long, thinking this would propel the subtle animosity between the Grandfather and Inuyasha through the mesosphere, but hey, love softens. Speaking of that, very enjoyable pondering, and realizations between Kagome and Inuyasha. Now, he's a product of his time, and even in contemporary times a girl's shamed (figures, 'blame' that's rightfully shared w/the male,not that there should be such an issue for girls,grrrrrrr). So...can your elated reader request an addendum to the epilogue? I'm curious as to how you'd write their mating, wedding. Speaking of which, also enjoyed *tremendously* the spoken acknowledgement of Shippou being their pup. Kawaiiii!!! Lovely,lovely--would that more kids are adopted,though w/o all that thumping, LOL). And Miroku + Sango also had their moment to shine, amidst the daunting task of resurrecting her village, *sniff*. Thanks for an enjoyable ride..oh,drat,not signed in; 3rd time this wk reviewing is being blocked!Will figure out...
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really sweet although you chapters are short it was really really good a bi rushed if you ask me but i liked it keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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