| "Lion Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: the bell rang
Reviewed By: muganda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its time to go home when gohan reached home he started to worry about his dad, he Remembered when his dad sacrificed for his life for not gohan to die, and then chichi came in and said whats wrong nothing. I know sometimes it hurts i miss goku too as well.
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Title: my first day at gollege
Reviewed By: muganda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chichi kissed gohan on the cheek and said goobye gohan reaches the school, the teacher said introduce your self to the class. Well my name is gohan the teacher said sit between videl.
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Reviewed By: silvermoon8573 On: March 30, 2005 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I loved the close family connection. Maybe it was a little too long. The ending was boring to be honest.
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Reviewed By: taimos On: January 31, 2005 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the story...it gives a light on the shidou family and how they feel. too bad it couldn't be continued with kakeru finally finding out the truth about his dad's reason for leaving. or even some more pairs! XD
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: ChaosReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW IS IT that you only have four reviews!!! It's a crime, I tell you!!! This is an absolutely amazing story... THANK YOU for writing it!!! I especially love the angle you took on MKR; I do believe that you are the only person who has created a story focusing on Hikaru, her brothers, and her life at home. What's more, you executed their characters so brilliantly that I have no doubt that Hikaru's life is really like that. You truly are talented!!!
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Reviewed By: Hime-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fanic...*starts to giggle* Sorry just thinking about what would have happened if Eagle did share Hikaru with Lantis...*laughs some more* |
Reviewed By: Chibi Michi On: June 24, 2002 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the fic alot. This is the best Hikaru based fanfic I have read. Good displayment of Hikaru and her brother's relationship. It was a great fic in all aspects. I hope you write another one like this ^^ |
Reviewed By: Firestorm_244 On: December 12, 2001 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More people should read and review your fic. It's really good. I've read all four chapters that you written so far and I'll have to day it really good. One of the better Rayearth fic reads. I actually didn't read it here though, I read it on fanfiction, where my name is Darkstar. again really good. You don't get many people writing about Hikaru's brothers. Actually, you're lucky if an author even mentions them it seems... Or the authors give then absolutly no character and thus they become very flat. *No offense again other authors* Any way, great fic. I can't wait till you write more. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Duece of Spades On: November 06, 2001 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this! It's so great to see an introspective fic concerning Hikaru's brothers, and not just another Hikaru, Umi, Fuu fic. You can get so much more feel for a character by examining their families. Please continue. |
