| "Dog Daze" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Cute
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was just SO cute! It could've been SO much more too and I was sad when it ended so quickly. :( Oh well, it was cute nonetheless. I honestly have to say that I have never read another Inuyasha fanfic that cursed Inuyasha with the mindset of a puppy! ^^ That alone makes your fanfic original and creative, not to mention adorable. I only wish it would've been longer and had a larger plot. I do hope you write more fanfiction in the future, especially something with more substance! ^^
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Title: Cute Story
Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay, your story was great. I LOVE like the Inuyasha stories you write. continue to write storys!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was such a cute story . I hope you have other stories.
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Reviewed By: MaiBlossom On: March 18, 2005 16:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I really really like that FF! Thanks for that nice stuff!
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Reviewed By: MaiBlossom On: March 18, 2005 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I really really like that FF! Thanks for that nice stuff!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAaaaawwwww!!!!! That was such a kawaii story!!! I loved it. I want Inu-chan to be my doggie. He's so sweet this way. :: squeals happily:: Hope you continue writting such sweet stories. Later
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Reviewed By: Your story On: March 03, 2005 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I see that you are trying to fix the formatting on your story. You should not center the story on the page, but instead should align it to the left like in a book. You should also put an extra blank line between paragraphs so that it breaks up the text more and makes it easier to read. Thank you and I hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: Your story On: March 03, 2005 15:08 CST
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You have a cute story but you should correct your grammar. You should start a new paragraph every time a new person speaks and every time a new action occurs by a new person. Break up your story into readable paragraphs, otherwise, no one will read it.
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Reviewed By: Fix it please On: March 03, 2005 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Please fix your formatting. Put an extra line between paragraphs. It is too hard to read your story right now because it looks like one long block of text. Fix it please.
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Title: aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 12:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Please please please, write in paragraph form!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that is cute!!! and really funny. Inuyasha is such a sweet dog. I want him as my dog. I hope you'll continue this story. Pleeeeaaaase. I think Shippou is going to die laughing. XD
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