| "Vindicated" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Altiar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first relitvly long fanfic to make me want to read on. The story line was original and exiting. The plot twists were to say the least captivating and I belive you should DEFINATLY write a sequel. Just please don't kill Beast Boy he's to important of a charecter to kill off readers will loose intrest.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: raiden54 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the Fanfic you shouldn't Stop and Beastboy Better not Die J/k it's your fanfic you can do whatever you want to it but. this is a good Fanfic.
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Title: California_dreamers
Reviewed By: California_dreamers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay... let just start with the good talk. i love they way you write and describe everything! its so great i love it love it love it!! its probably because beastboy is my favorite charecter but still it was great even if you wernt a fan of beastboy! now with the other news... I SWEAR IF YOU KILL OFF BEASTBOY I WILL KILL YOU(j/k)and ya it would be a good idea to do a continuation! people would love it i know iw do!!!! so do another and just for the hell of it why dont you make beastboy fall for raven this time, dont matter to me if you dont take my advise but take it under consideration... you could really do alot with it... ill be waiting till then....
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: raiden54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is amazing. It so deep I almost starting crying and it's really hard to cry for me, also it was simply breathtaking I'm almost speechless. You need to look at it closely cause some of your words was spelled wrong.
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Reviewed By: artistdude3838 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude good fan fic i'm only up to chaoter three but it is awsome, the way you right is very whats the word "unique", but still I must object to like two things. on how perverted beast boy can be (chapter one the sponge bath) and how the girl was almost raped a couple of times and is telling jokes? not very beleveable cahrtization but still it is deffantly a fov of mine now
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Title: FFARG review-Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the submission. For starters, it's hard to get involved in a story that has such short chapters. The base of the story is there, you just need to develop your style and skills better. Your focus should be to pull the readers into the story...adding detail will not only bring the readers into the story a little closer, it will also lengthen the chapters a little. To start...you have five senses...your character POV is Beast Boy...do not move from it until there is a scene change. Everything that happens shoud be:thought, heard, felt, seen,smelled and so on through his eyes. Not all of them should be done at once...but you need to use them. For instance when he is talking about the rain you could focus on the feel of it as it hit him. The smell of it in the air...etc. Emotions and reactions to the things he witnesses should be addressed. What happens to him when he feels shocked? The plot beneath the story seems to be strong, it just takes practice for your 'voice' to come out in your writing. Keep up the nice work and thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: ClownyMelonBalls [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very interesting and enjoyable to say the least. I absolutely loved the fact that I couldn't even guess as to what was going to happen next. The only problems I found are spelling and grammar issues. Keep up the good work and pm me if you write a sequel.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I don't usually give out nines in the overall rating but this was just so damn cool that I had to. I've been reading this all along and I just haven't reviewed but it's one of the few that held my intrest to the end. I think a diffrent POV would be cool, maybe Star's considering you made her a pretty big character in this one. The other think I think would be cool would be like an afterlife story, but that's just me. I think the final chapter cou;'ve been a little longer, although you did cover all the bases, and had a few more details, aside from that great fic and I'm looking forward to your next story ~~The truly wise express themselves for in Expressions we find happiness~~ PS~ I think you did a way cool job with the Plasmus twist, I truly thought that Em was a Terra clone and that it was Slade controling her, I never really thought of plasmus as someone smart enough to think up a plan that would be worthy of Slade's mind, way to go.
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Reviewed By: Jamer The Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 19:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Yo man, thanks for reviewing, you are right, my characters are not themselfs on my stroy, thats way i have made a few fixs to my stroy, tell me what you think, and what should I do to improve it...By the way keep writing your story, its really good....Until next time, your budie, Jammer The Titan
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Title: Good.................
Reviewed By: malchior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good but it could be great keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Jamer The Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, it was a good story, and very original, would you do me a favor, review my story, its called A NEW TITAN, A NEW LOVE, plz review it, its my first fic so if it is a bad one, im sorry, see ya...
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