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| "Beside Me" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mabel Chan On: April 30, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was so sweet
| Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: April 21, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this piece. There were a few grammatical errors hiding here and there, but overall, it is very well written. Both B and V were in character even despite the sweetness of the story. Thats pretty hard to do sometimes. It was refreshing and a lovely read.
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 21:52 CST
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Very romantic. I loved the bit with the buttons--it seemed to fit that someone who was so adept and precise in battle would be lost negotiating a human dress shirt. I know it's a hard thing to make a songfic and the old romance formula fresh, even harder to keep Vegeta IC, but this piece is so well-written and the "how much does the brat weigh?" line saved it from mooshiness. I really like your B/V stuff--real deep sigh material.
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