| "Aria" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 06:18 CDT
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Wauw.. that was like... sad... I loved it. But I don't think that Trunks, nor Bra would ever leave Vegeta... But It was waaayy sad.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde/kitauri (not logged in On: March 04, 2005 05:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Depressing but breathtaking. So much emotion caught up in such a short story. The imagery you presented is haunting and poignant. Thank you for giving me a new perspective and keep coming out with more of your works!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 03, 2005 14:05 CST
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Eloquent. Powerful. Beautiful. It's really the end I see for Vegeta. You've touched on a couple of thoughts I'm using myself for a story, so I cannot help but believe you've found the truth of it. Bravo!
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Title: Aria
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very strong story wolfie. to read how vegeta feels at the end of life and to know in someway he had regrets..please write more and soon...maria
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 11:32 CST
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that was absolutely amazing... I loved the way that Vegeta is contemplating all of this and shows how he has grown, his relation to bulma is beautiful...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Vegeta (no logged in) On: March 03, 2005 09:44 CST
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That was short but sweet. Showing all the Vegeta was thinking in his old age. You can sense his emotion even in the little one-shot. As they say, it's not the quantity (or length of the fic) but the quality that is put into it (and the quality is definitely there).
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 09:26 CST
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This is so powerful. The first line says it all. Vegeta unable to make a fist. That image is going to haunt me all day. Alrighty, make me think about mortality and our common humanity and all that before breakfast, will ya, wolfie? :-) Your Dbz fics are a gift to the fandom. I want to see more. This one is damn original and just killer.
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Reviewed By: Bloo.. Gakuto no kanojo^^ On: March 02, 2005 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say... I loved it. You seem to be able to capture Vegeta so well, the way he was intended to be. I can see those very thoughts going through his mind, even as a young and able Saiyan, with Bulma still alive and well. I think I said this to you before with Last Song: you can get your point across with so little words, and yet as short as it may be, it was very powerful. I hope to see an Epic from you OMG, that would be awesome. Thank you for sharing this with me, I really needed the good read^^
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