| "Object of My Affection" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: LOVE YOU!!!!
Reviewed By: Star Garden On: May 07, 2007 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYY!!! I love this story! and your other story, The Pearl. I love how everything you write seems to put a second meaning in even ordinary things. I just love the creativity too, and all of the feelings of frustration portrayed on the road to eventual love!! I LOVE it all!!! XDXDXD
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was writen very differently than most and i enjoyed it very much. Keep up the great work. I'll be sure to tell me friends about it.
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Title: Finally!!
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO glad I finally found a wonderfully written story about Rin and Sesshomaru. There's not that many out there, and of those that are, nothing compares to the story you have done. It was exciting to read and compelled me to read your other stories which I've done or am in the process of doing. I can't begin to describe how great this story is, so I'll stop here. I hope you continue writing in this venue. I'll be waiting for more!!
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Title: glad
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: April 20, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that I read this story. It is beautiful, poetic and creative. It has a sterling originality and the characters are true. Right now, I am reading "The Pearl" and I think your writing is exquisite. I'm a huge fan of Rin/Sess fics that have a realistic and well-thought out content and completion.
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Reviewed By: DPM On: March 29, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. The exploration of psyche as Rin struggles to understand Sess is well structured. You've migrate from scene to scene quite flawlessly. Very enjoyable plot. And thank goodness you didn't turn Rin into a complete wimp and Sess totally rocks in character. Good job maintaining his character integrity. I have to admit that I am new to the Inuyasha stuff but truly a die-hard fan of Sess/Rin(adult) pairing and this novellette of yours was really a cool read !
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Reviewed By: Argenti On: March 07, 2005 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is how I always imagined it would be for Sesshoumaru and Rin. I loved your idea of using objects to illustrate the relationship between them. Your style is wonderful: crisp and straightforward, with just enough poetry to make the lines sing. Well done!
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Title: anony
Reviewed By: anony On: March 06, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!!4x hope you could make " Object of My Affection" in sess' point of view. i hope you could illustrate or elaborate more on when, what and why he decided to take rin as a lifetime mate considering he hated ningen. i know how hard to visualise or write sesshoumaru without becoming ooc, but i just hope you could make it...to see some points or reason behind on making such decision.
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Reviewed By: Argenti On: March 05, 2005 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is how I always imagined it would be for Sesshoumaru and Rin. I loved your idea of using objects to illustrate the relationship between them. Your style is wonderful: crisp and straightforward, with just enough poetry to make the lines sing. Well done!
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Title: sesshyrin fan
Reviewed By: sesshyrin fan On: March 03, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best, seriously!!! i hope other sess/rin fan would see and read this...you could see the effort, how it is amazingly done!!! hope you could make another fic...cant wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Ebony-Rose (Not signed in) On: March 02, 2005 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVING IT! It's soooooooooooo cute, and the way you use those boots as a symbol of their growing relationship is quite original. I gotta say, your style of writing and story is very similiar to others, yet it is very unique in it's own way! Hope to see more Sess/Rin workz from you! I LOVE them! Ja ne!
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