| "The Model Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: COOLNESS
Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! You are a great writer! Although you shoulda had another lemon...LOL
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Yami was a model, huh? Well then I guess that Yuugi's modeling demonstration wasn't really needed. I wonder what happened to Yami that made him want to quit the modelling industry! Also, I wonder if Yami started to collect Yuugi's pictures after he meet him or while they were 'going out' or whatever...That's kinda scary! Obviously Yuugi's going to find the picture, I just wonder if he'll go in the room too and find all of his pictures. I mean, if it was me and I saw like hundreds of pictures of me all on the wall of some guy's place, then I would be a little freaked out, no matter how much I liked the guy (maybe even more because of it). But I'm not exactly sure how Yuugi's going to react if he found out, I mean, Yuugi likes Yami a lot but still...He'll probably freak out and prehaps Yami won't be his favourite photographer anymore. Anyways, this is a very interesting fanfic and I like it a lot. It's a very different fanfic than I thought it would be when I first saw it and I'm happy with the overall results. Now I'm just going to sit here and wait for you to update again ^-^ So do that soon! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: fei8000000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:14 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY LEMON!!! now whats up with this whole Yami thing?? i wanna know so please write more
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So adorable! This is so cute and well written...
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Reviewed By: Cherazz On: March 06, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools* Damn this is hot! I'm so psyched for the lemon! Mmm and I loved the 'foreplay' This next chapter should be interesting, don't leave us hanging too long;) Great work! I love your fics!
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Title: EVIL!>
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, how could you!? *Sobs* It was just getting good! EEEEE! You must update, please! I am begging you! Must read delicious YugixYami lemon!*Bangs head on desk*
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 16:07 CST
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Inner turmoil...ha, be sure to use something like that in the story...LOL! Anyways, good chapter! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: fei8000000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
great story and now get to writing please can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Motje (i'm lazy) On: March 06, 2005 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that's one sexy cliffy! Nice..
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love what you have going here. This has an excellent plot so far^^ And I love the fact that Yugi has to modle his body off for Yami, eeee! That would be so hot. I hope Yugi and Yami get together soon. Please update soon^^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Cherazz On: March 04, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave an overall rating of 9 because I think the chapters should be a little longer;) That's all:P Great work and I love the originality! I've seen nothing like this before! Yami is so damn hot, and damn, Yugi too! I wanna read some lemon! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 11:32 CST
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I have a question. Does Yugi ever have to model briefs? It would be... *coughs* interesting. Anyway, awesome new fic, I love it. And that Pedro Napolean guy was an ass, how could he take away those boxers like that?! (BTW, the name sounds suspiciously like it came from Napolean Dynamite) Well, update soon, and I hope the lemon's coming soon.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
More soon!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww!!! This is so cyute! I love it and it's originality! Keep up the fantastic work and can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
WAI! This is so cute! WAI! I just love your AUs!
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